Alex's Language Arts Grade 8: Expository Essay

Thursday, January 6, 2011

At January 8, 2011 at 7:05 AM , JennyDOng said...

Great job in using descriptive language, as well as strong vocabularies. Each of your ideas had been using a very convincing examples, and i like best the way you connect the social issue to real life science in the second paragraph. In my opinion, i think mentioning about sustainability of human is a Great Great argument, in which related it to a whole thing that we had learned in the second Semester of Social studies. For the Grammatic part...i am speechless!
At January 8, 2011 at 7:07 AM , JennyDOng said...

BTW, the Second Semester thingy, please understand that it is SECOND QUARTER!
At January 9, 2011 at 1:28 AM , Jessica Tran said...

I like your essay, I don't have anything to say about it. But I have an advice for you, get more sleep!!!! Hope you still remember what Mr.Josh said to our class about sleeping and grades.
At January 10, 2011 at 2:51 AM , Tommy .Z(Zerorrockmanaxlx) Tran said...

I am speechless, this is one of the most detailed and organized esssay eva
At January 13, 2011 at 1:05 PM , antonia_nguyen11345 said...

I love your essay, especially the introduction. You even brought your experiences in science class into this essay, so I can't say anything but great job with all your evidence and support in your essay. :)